Monday, March 23, 2009

Nick Harris

Power corrupts, when said it makes you think of presidents and generals that were once considered great people but have fallen due to being consumed by the power they have been granted. Power can corrupt anyone from a senator to a principal to a preschooler. Macbeth and his wife are the perfect example of someone who has been corrupted. Here is a good man who has never committed a crime and is a loyal follower of King Duncan. By the end of the book Macbeth is a murdering evil plotting maniac. Macbeth had a good life a his own castle and was the Thane of Cawdor, all this was not enough. In the following essay I will show some of the quotes that show Macbeth and Lady Macbeth’s transition from good to evil.

My first quote is “What have we hear, you mysterious black hags of midnight what is it what you do” This quote means that Macbeth is looking for the witches for advice. Why in the heck would he do that, that’s like me going to the neighborhood drug dealer to ask him for advice about life, not good! From the books that I’ve read that contained witches most of them only seek to hurt the main character in some way or to bring him or her misfortune. In the book you’re probably wondering about how this relates to the topic power corrupts, but Macbeth is going to a corrupted source for advice to keep his power. Last time I checked most witches are evil except for the one in the Wizard of Oz. My advice to Macbeth would be to go to Banquo or Ross, someone he can trust.

The next quote I have is about Lady Macbeth. She is so corrupted by the sense of power she claims "I have given suck, and know
How tender 'tis to love the babe that milks me; I would, while it was smiling in my face,
Have plucked my nipple from his boneless gums and dashed the brains out, had I so sworn as you have done to this"(1.7.55-59). This basically means that Lady Macbeth is willing to bash her own baby’s brains out if that would enable her to be queen. I’m not a mom but I’m pretty sure that’s unfathomable to most moms. Before Macbeth even mentions to his wife about the witches’ prophecy Lady Macbeth seems like a decent person, but after the news she turns crazy.

The last quote that I am going to use is “Let not light see my black and deep desires” (1.4.51). Macbeth knows deep down that he wants to be the big enchilada and that he must kill King Duncan to do it, and he is ashamed of himself for even considering it. Macbeth is ashamed of himself because him and King Duncan are good friends and King Duncan would never even think about doing something like that to Macbeth. King Duncan considers Macbeth one of his most trustworthy best friends and Macbeth knows that he feels like this. Macbeth knows if he does kill King Duncan he can never go back. While he thinks it will be a quick job that will be over in five minutes. I’m sure that there is something in the back of his mind that says he will have to keep lying and murdering to

2 comments:

KelseyO'Connell said...

1 I like your thesis you tell the reader what your going to be talking about. I liked how you said anyone can be corrupted from a senator, to a princapal, to a preschooler.

2 I think your best example was when you brought up the witches never being good and always bringing misfortune so it foreshadows that nothing good will come out of there advice

3 I like the writing style you used, how you sort of asked questions throughout and related it to things that happen in real life

4 the only thing i would maybe change is the last line of the thesis but thats the only thing i could really point out so i dont know if id even do that the essay already seems good.

Wes Parker said...

I - The thesis isn't extremely clear, but he used a good comparison ("presidents and generals that were once considered great people but have fallen due to being consumed by the power they have been granted.". It engages you because the opening, unlike many others, uses comparisons that arent from the book itslef- which is good.

II - "I have given suck, and know
How tender 'tis to love the babe that milks me; I would, while it was smiling in my face,
Have plucked my nipple from his boneless gums and dashed the brains out, had I so sworn as you have done to this"(1.7.55-59). This is the most powerful quotes because it is so outrageous in the book, and it is very relevant to the subject.

III - I think the writing style is a strong point in this essay.-Here is a good man who has never committed a crime and is a loyal follower of King Duncan. By the end of the book Macbeth is a murdering evil plotting maniac.

IV - My advice would be to look over the intro again and maybe adjust a couple things. Mostly just the intro. Overall a great essay.